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Thomas Jarington
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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby Thomas Jarington » July 17th, 2014, 10:57 pm

fair enough. Names have now been changed to protect the guilty. Cheers

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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby Pathovar » August 2nd, 2014, 2:03 am

@ "From Darkness; Light"

I like where this is going. If and when mighty Lord Stepanos drags himself out of this hole and dons his armor once again, I may physically stand up and cheer in my own home.

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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby LEGION » August 2nd, 2014, 8:51 am

@ Bradford's Belt: I'm very glad to see an acknowledgement from Kingsley that his case is largely circumstantial, and probably would not withstand a Magistrate's scrutiny at this point. As frustrating as it has been for others investigating Funk and whatnot, I've stuck to my guns about the purity of evidence and maintaining prosecutability.

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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby LEGION » August 4th, 2014, 9:16 am

@ Working Hard to Relax -- for some reason, I saw this video and it made me think of Barnaby....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lsRPv-I ... P0rjZ8qVJs

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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby Lukar » August 4th, 2014, 9:50 am

LEGION wrote:@ Working Hard to Relax -- for some reason, I saw this video and it made me think of Barnaby....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lsRPv-I ... P0rjZ8qVJs


Not relevant to the rest of the story, but that line "that damn riff" made me think of:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1__dINxiXU

Or more specifically how the riff kept popping up all season.
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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby Tezzkali » August 4th, 2014, 2:53 pm

LEGION wrote: As frustrating as it has been for others investigating Funk and whatnot, I've stuck to my guns about the purity of evidence and maintaining prosecutability.


Don' ya worry none, there. We be prosecutin' them just fine.

Thomas Jarington
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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby Thomas Jarington » August 7th, 2014, 12:59 am

@ Tezzkali: You do realize that Thom carves troll tusks for a hobby, right? If he still lives, that is. Details are sketchy at the moment as to his whereabouts.

@ Nolan: Great start on your preamble! Loved it. Welcome to the club, welcome to...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VuJwJx3Zf4I&index=4&list=RDWYFNy_Gk0HM

the society of uncompromising writers, welcome to ravenhood. ::shrug::
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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby LEGION » August 7th, 2014, 1:16 pm

Thomas Jarington wrote:@ Nolan: Great start on your preamble! Loved it. Welcome to the club, welcome to...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VuJwJx3Zf4I&index=4&list=RDWYFNy_Gk0HM

the society of uncompromising writers, welcome to ravenhood. ::shrug::


When I first saw the commercial, I thought, "Is Jarington suggesting there are plot holes?" referring to the fact that the guy puts a big hole in his sweater. Then I reached the end of the commercial. :P

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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby Nolan » August 7th, 2014, 4:57 pm

Thomas Jarington wrote: @ Nolan: Great start on your preamble! Loved it. Welcome to the club, welcome to...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VuJwJx3Zf4I&index=4&list=RDWYFNy_Gk0HM

the society of uncompromising writers, welcome to ravenhood. ::shrug::



I'm glad I visited this thread, you could certainly comment on the actual thread though. The rest of the story is going on the reserved post. :) Thanks for the praise though. I wrote that in about an hour last night before I went to bed, so I was afraid that people would point out a ton of bad writing. :P
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Re: Feedback and Comments for our Writers

Postby LEGION » August 7th, 2014, 5:16 pm

Nolan wrote:I wrote that in about an hour last night before I went to bed, so I was afraid that people would point out a ton of bad writing. :P


<raises hand> Hi there. I'm Legion. Simon Cowell's evil twin.

Seriously, though, if you ever REALLY want something of yours dissected, I'm one of the people to ask. I usually try to keep from volunteering that kind of feedback except to people that I know are actively working towards a writing profession. (Basically, if it can't get past ME due to grammar or plot inconsistencies, there's almost no way it will make it past a professional book-reader.)

On the whole, here, the Sanctum-goers are pretty gentle -- and the community rules encourage this. So it is reasonably safe to put up stuff, even if you believe it might be 'bad'. ;)

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